I. Introduction Paragraph:
Content:1. Does the Introduction open with a “hook” that grabs the reader’s attention?
• Does the “hook” make you want to read more?
• How could your partner improve the “hook” to be even more attention grabbing?
o Suggestions/Comments:
2. Does the Introduction effectively introduce your topic?
• Does it define important and recurring terminology (if appropriate)?
• Does it give A BRIEF overview of the topic (if needed)?
• Does the writer discuss the topic’s importance or relevance (Why should your reader be interested?)?
• What are you still confused about in regard to the topic? How could your partner make the topic
more “reader-friendly” and clear?
o Suggestions/Comments:
3. Does the Introduction close the paragraph with a strong, clear thesis statement?
• Does the thesis statement:
• Contain all the sub-topics or “strands” that you will be discussing in your essay?
• Include your strong, arguable stance on the topic?
• How could your partner make his/her thesis statement even more clear and compelling?
o Suggestions/Comments:
Body Paragraphs: FOR EACH BODY PARAGRAPH
II. Components of Body Paragraph:
- Topic Sentence
- Introduction to detail
- Detail- summary, paraphrase, or direct quote
- Commentary- a response to the research
- Conclusion sentence
1. Topic Sentence- Underline topic sentence
- Is the topic sentence parallel with the thesis statement?
- Is it specific?
- Is it clear?
2. Introduction to Detail
- Do you introduce the first detail?
3. Detail- *Star details*
- Does the detail support your topic support?
- Is it properly cited?
4. Commentary- Circle commentary
- Does the commentary explain, sum up or translate the detail?
- Is it sufficient?
5. Conclusion sentence- Double underline the conclusion sentence
- Does the conclusion summarize the main idea of the paragraph and transition to next point?
III. Conclusion Paragraph:
1. Does the writer restate the main idea as the first sentence of the paragraph? Is it clear?
2. Does the writer reiterate the main points in the paper? Make sure that it does not sound too repetitive.
3. Does the writer leave the reader with a lasting thought? (i.e. something they learned from the paper, the point that is trying to be proved, etc.)