This paper’s thesis statement:
Because Christmas has been destroyed by commercialism, the day children receive presents should be postponed until January 6 – the day of the Epiphany – in order to bring back Christmas’s original meaning.
reworded thesis
Moving the gift-giving aspect of the Christmas season to Epiphany would be a great way to refocus Christians to the real meaning of Christmas. No one would be harmed by this change. Companies and businesses would still make the same amount of money, and Christmas would regain its intended meaning. In order for Christmas to be truly a spiritual holiday, the commercial aspects of the holiday must be pushed back to the Epiphany. The importance of Christmas day should not hinge on the presents found under the Christmas tree.
final thought
Middle section: Summing up the body paragraphs
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